Tuesday, December 16, 2008

i found this scrawled on proof

the pale yellow bag of
California almonds blends
with the desk nobody's
graffitied yet.
his cowboy boots creak
in harmony with the
blond wood chair
and we stare
blindly
ahead
forward
on.

5 comments:

the unholy atlantic said...

this is my favorite thing you have ever written ever.
(it reminds me of the last narnia book.)

Annie-Laure said...

this did not remind me of narnia. it reminded me of those pale yellow peanut m&ms my mom always buys on easter.
i have been studying vocab for too long.

Ianthe Wilde said...

i'm pretty sure i never made it past "prince caspian."
does that mean i fail at life?

the unholy atlantic said...

WHAT.
VOYAGE OF THE DAWN TREADER IS THE BEST ONE. READ THAT ONE.
THE SILVER CHAIR IS OKAY BUT THE LAST BATTLE IS AMAZING.

Coweh said...

my taste and riley's taste in narnia books vary greatly.

however,

READ THEM ALL.